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Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl by Sabtastic Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl by Sabtastic
I don't normally post iphone quality photos of my artwork, but sadly I no longer have a scanner! < /3 

Drew this little miss on green paper with black ballpoint pen, sharpie, silver marker (the eyes and necklace are highly reflective), and white acrylic Molotow pen.
Took about 2-3 hours!

I'm actually really happy with how this turned out (despite the characteristic flaws that come with drawing straight away in pen). I based her face on the style of an artist I really admire on Twitter--! (KR0NPR1NZ :iconkr0npr1nz:).

So far the artwork is doing really well on /r/IDAP on Reddit, so I might actually part with the original if I can find somebody to compensate me for it... Yay! 

Anywho, it's been a while since my last art update, but I promise to have a TRUCKLOAD of new content soon! I'm just wrapping up 13 commissions that I made as a fund-raiser for my collision last month. They're due to be posted soon! c:
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Your art is bad and you should feel bad..............


Can you imagine. I spent some time sitting here thinking, man I should post this shitty critique, just to be a dick. But I cant, because I love your art. (But image this with half a star on each rating, funny right).

Pros:
-Tieflings are an awesome race of creature I love them, they are Pathfinder's (basically D&D) most customizable race. So there is that (5/5 impact)

-Narrow her eyes a bit, and this is basically a Sabtiefling. I think she looks a little like you.

-The detailing on the horns is top notch as well as the bright silver eyes.

Cons:

-The not using pencil on that line across the chin/lower jaw bothers me. its like, this line....I dont know...I want to erase it...hnng (.5 a point from tech)

-Her right (left of image) shoulder looks a little off. It looks like her shoulder is dislocated and sitting on her torso, rather than to the side. Unless she is reaching up, at which point we would be able to see the armpit at the bottom. On second look It looks like the shoulder is just too short. Its hard to describe, but I think you get the point (hence the low Vision rating)

Overall I would say START OVER DO IT AGAIN! *FLIPS TABLE*

lol, 9/10, I love it, good job!
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MrSentriss Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
This looks awesome! 
 Great job!
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NICHOLAS-MARK-AMOS Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's crazy-good. I bet it smells though aha. Pen drawings. 
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, nah it's fine! Once the markers dry I don't notice that alcohol/sharpie smell.
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NICHOLAS-MARK-AMOS Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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Kendioke Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Professional Writer
DUCK! -Points at the charm on her left horn-
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol good eye! ;) 
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Hyptosis Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
She's gorgeous, and you're rocking the colored paper! I really need to bust out some paper and act like a real artist sometime. :P Keep it up! ^5
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha Thanks!!
The only reason I keep doodling on cheap paper is because I keep buying all these cool art markers and I just HAVE TO DRAW with them. <: 

My three favourite so far are the PenTel Brush Pens, the Copic Drawing Pen, and all of the Molotow Acrylic Paint Pens because they have AMAZING opaque white to highlight stuff with.

Seriously man; if you get these you'll be unable to stop doodling. lol
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Hyptosis Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I will certainly check these out! They look really fun. When it comes to pens and markers and stuff, I really have no clue what to buy nor how to use any of them. :P
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Aristodes Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't see how anyone could dislike this. It's not like it has an offensive label or anything. Very nicely done.
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! 

Haha, if you're referring to the review at the top of this page; he was just kidding around. 
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Gismome7Nightmary Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
That's just awsome!
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Jar3d-Washington Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Those horns are just awesome! I like that there is a ribbon tied to the one on the left.
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childersart Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Awesome!!
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ColinEquinox Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Sexy
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Riv0t Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You have improved so much! You've always been amazing, but you really have perfected your style and quality of work. This is amazing.
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Ahh thanks!! ://3
You've improved a lot too!! 


WE'RE MOVIN' ON UP :dummy:
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Riv0t Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Level up!!! :3
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Ragnarok6664 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sweet :) love the horns
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Athane Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
still in love with this, showed it to a friend, also forgot to put a 'LOL' in my critique after the first line, sorry if it led to confusion
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yakiteri Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
So beautiful!! Her expression is wonderful and I love the limited color palette you chose!
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank youuu! <:

It means a lot coming from you!
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yakiteri Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome! Your work is always super pretty and awesome! :D
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Semiautomagic Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it longing in her eyes, is it mischief? She seems to be lost in thought, and it looks so realistic, so natural. I really like the little touches of dressing her horns with a little flair, just to help make her feel pretty or special. She seems like the kind of individual who might turn heads, that would encourage people to come up to speak with her; but I am not certain if she realizes it. I adore the stories that you artwork starts to develop in my mind, each time I see something new from you. I know my little ideas may not fit the character that you create, but this is a lovely piece and my mind can't help but want to know more about this person. Glad to see more coming from you, take care and let your imagination run wild!
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Ahhh this is so flattering you don't even know!! 

The idea that I'm inspiring creative thought of any variety means so much to me. Thank you.
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NeverMakeIt2TheTop Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Very impressive
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! < 3
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Chantel-sky Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
She kinda reminds me of a female Draenei from WoW, not sure if that was your intention :)
Nice work though
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Some other people were pointing that out, too...! Wasn't really my intention personally, but I'm glad it sparks the thought! ...Draenei look so awesome!!
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SweetieBatch Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome!
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Deathmaws Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
I don't know how but you always manage to make rather terrifying creatures with a woman's physique very attractive. Keep up the great work.
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CloserRook Featured By Owner Edited Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta love that cute expression. Great work Sab! :nod:
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks maaaaan! <:
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KillerDrock Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So Hot!
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Hah thankyou!
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magicswordz Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Pretty awesome Sabby.
I do like them demon girls
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks mang :B
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AK-Is-Harmless Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. Really well done! :nod:

---AK
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Glad you like it!! c:
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AK-Is-Harmless Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:salute:

---AK
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Bensaret Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
She is sooo cute! Love that face :)
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ShotLiver Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
daddy like.
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Starayo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh man, that looks wonderful.
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AidoandLyla Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Awesome work :D It's so nice when starting straight away with pen gives good end result isn't it? <3 Great job! 
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