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Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl by Sabtastic Ballpoint Pen Monster Girl by Sabtastic
I don't normally post iphone quality photos of my artwork, but sadly I no longer have a scanner! < /3 

Drew this little miss on green paper with black ballpoint pen, sharpie, silver marker (the eyes and necklace are highly reflective), and white acrylic Molotow pen.
Took about 2-3 hours!

I'm actually really happy with how this turned out (despite the characteristic flaws that come with drawing straight away in pen). I based her face on the style of an artist I really admire on Twitter--! (KR0NPR1NZ :iconkr0npr1nz:).

So far the artwork is doing really well on /r/IDAP on Reddit, so I might actually part with the original if I can find somebody to compensate me for it... Yay! 

Anywho, it's been a while since my last art update, but I promise to have a TRUCKLOAD of new content soon! I'm just wrapping up 13 commissions that I made as a fund-raiser for my collision last month. They're due to be posted soon! c:
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Your art is bad and you should feel bad..............


Can you imagine. I spent some time sitting here thinking, man I should post this shitty critique, just to be a dick. But I cant, because I love your art. (But image this with half a star on each rating, funny right).

Pros:
-Tieflings are an awesome race of creature I love them, they are Pathfinder's (basically D&D) most customizable race. So there is that (5/5 impact)

-Narrow her eyes a bit, and this is basically a Sabtiefling. I think she looks a little like you.

-The detailing on the horns is top notch as well as the bright silver eyes.

Cons:

-The not using pencil on that line across the chin/lower jaw bothers me. its like, this line....I dont know...I want to erase it...hnng (.5 a point from tech)

-Her right (left of image) shoulder looks a little off. It looks like her shoulder is dislocated and sitting on her torso, rather than to the side. Unless she is reaching up, at which point we would be able to see the armpit at the bottom. On second look It looks like the shoulder is just too short. Its hard to describe, but I think you get the point (hence the low Vision rating)

Overall I would say START OVER DO IT AGAIN! *FLIPS TABLE*

lol, 9/10, I love it, good job!
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NICHOLAS-MARK-AMOS Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's crazy-good. I bet it smells though aha. Pen drawings. 
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, nah it's fine! Once the markers dry I don't notice that alcohol/sharpie smell.
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NICHOLAS-MARK-AMOS Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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Kendioke Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Professional Writer
DUCK! -Points at the charm on her left horn-
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol good eye! ;) 
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Hyptosis Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
She's gorgeous, and you're rocking the colored paper! I really need to bust out some paper and act like a real artist sometime. :P Keep it up! ^5
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Haha Thanks!!
The only reason I keep doodling on cheap paper is because I keep buying all these cool art markers and I just HAVE TO DRAW with them. <: 

My three favourite so far are the PenTel Brush Pens, the Copic Drawing Pen, and all of the Molotow Acrylic Paint Pens because they have AMAZING opaque white to highlight stuff with.

Seriously man; if you get these you'll be unable to stop doodling. lol
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Hyptosis Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I will certainly check these out! They look really fun. When it comes to pens and markers and stuff, I really have no clue what to buy nor how to use any of them. :P
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Noguy Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't see how anyone could dislike this. It's not like it has an offensive label or anything. Very nicely done.
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Sabtastic Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! 

Haha, if you're referring to the review at the top of this page; he was just kidding around. 
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