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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Only a couple things stand out to me as looking a bit off. The arm/shoulder seem to be a bit too far forwards, though that may just be my imagination. The two middle fingers of the hand on the ground look as if they are very short. Possibly putting each of them slightly to one side, the middle finger to the left, and ring to the right. However, the other hand looks excellent, clasped around the blade
The feet are the only other part that seem a bit off. The one on the right looks a bit flat, as if it's bent too far backwards. Possibly, to keep the flow of the piece, maybe have her foot going forward instead? On her toes instead of kneeling on them, so she's ready to spring into action!
The other foot seems to be a little too far up, as if she's either got her legs spread wise apart (which she obviously doesn't), or she's holding it slightly off of the floor (though I can see the heel seems to be lifted)
Other than that, this drawing looks excellent! Her expression is fierce, and the hair looks fantastic. Folds in the cloth really bring the idea of how she's posing to life. And I love the little details like the chopsticks in the hair, to the flowers on her dress! Well done, and I can't wait to check out the rest of your gallery
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